I approve!
Not too bad, but here are my suggestions.
1. Spend more time on the story/jokes. Nothing too interesting or funny happened.
2. Spend more time on the graphics! From the charecter design I can tell that you definately know how to draw. I had a feeling, however, that you just wanted to get the drawing over with.
Other than that, this series has the potential to be a powerhouse if you're willing to do the work.